Feedback so far

Max Ward Blog Feedback                                                                                                 November 2014

Task Research and Planning Part 2	Incomplete/ Limited 0-7 marks	Basic 8-11 marks	Proficient 12-15 marks	Excellent 16-20 marks
Key scene	All in basic
Key Scene script
Prop List
Locations		ü
Filming key scenes			ü
Film logo ideas				ü
Audience feedback on logo ideas				ü
Shot list			ü
Production company logo ideas				ü
Audience feedback on logo ideas				ü
WWW: ü  Your first key scene shows some promise with a range of shots and some more proficient editing. ü  It is good to see you are conducting some independent and innovative additions to the spreadsheet to develop your research and planning. ü  You are using a wide range of technologies and are experimenting a bit more with editing. ü  You logo ideas are very good and you show practical strengths here. ü  You are making more progress with your blog than in Autumn 1. ü  You have started to blog in more detail but need to ensure you do this for all posts.
EBI: ·       You need to ensure you have three separate key scenes that follow your plan and show an awareness of narrative, genre and audience. ·       Proof read your blog posts there are a number of simple SPaG errors/ typos e.g. ‘i’ ·       Shot list should be in a table so it is clear and detailed – edit this blog post. ·       Remember that an external examiner is going to assess you work – ensure you maintain a formal tone and remove any giggly video. ·       You need to ensure all aspects of blogged work are completed to a proficient standard – the things that are limited are in need of more effort/ completion.
Pupil Comment: I am relatively happy with my feedback so far and think it is a fair evaluation of my coursework so far; I will be making many amendments to my coursework to improve my blog and result. I need to describe my posts so that the examiner will be know what the post is about and re-filming 2 of my key scenes so that they are more up to standard. I also need to complete a second film analysis.